Category: Communication

Writing to Describe- IGCSE English Piece 1

Relentlessly, I strode away from my opposition. Im destined to win, i will not take failure and disappointed as an option. Every second I inhale and exhale the precious oxygen, endless calculations flow through my body sending messages to me on how I’m going to win. A machine as I am, I looked the engrave marks onto the track as I ignite the tarmac with my velocity. This has not came from no luck but just pure genius and hard work.

The finishing line was finally there, the last dip towards the line had been accomplished as time does matter as I am wanting to re write the scripts and make history. The emotions ran through my veins. Relief, joy and humbleness ran through my veins as I remained relaxed with my composure trying to not take the joy of victory take away the image of professionalism. I am an athlete in ambition of doing great things in the world of athletics. This was only a minor, the bigger and important challenges of the journey will slowly come towards me so i can encounter them and predominantly, break through them.


Going back to the moment, i glanced towards the pack and felt the level of admiration they had for me being victorious of a predicted close sprint. I could say that for the moemnt the hours of training has paid off, but the cycle doesnt stop there, im looking to overload this body so I can achieve full potential of what this body can achieve. A true champion doesnt stop there after triumphing after one event, there always aspects on improvement and I am sure to spot out and strengthen

This is Your Online Domain

Hello and welcome to your personal online journal.

Edutronic has been created to enhance and enrich your learning at the London Nautical School. Its purpose is to provide you with an audience for your work (or work-in-progress) and you have the choice (by altering the ‘visibility’ of your posts) of whether your work on here is visible to the world, or only to your teacher.

Anything you post here in the public domain represents you and thus it’s important that you take care with that decision, but don’t be afraid to publish your work – as the feedback you may get from people at home, your peers and people from around the internet is only likely to enhance it.

Remember you can always access your class blog and all manner of resources through the Edutronic main website – and by all means check out the sites of your peers to see what they’re getting up to as well.

If you have any questions for your teacher, an excellent way to get an answer is to create a new private post on this journal. Your teachers are am notified of any new posts and will reply swiftly to any queries.

Make the most of, and enjoy this new freedom in your English learning!

“There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.” ― Ernest Hemingway